Hi Elldiana, thank you for telling us a little about yourself, but keeping your information cybersmart as you have is very important. Good use of full stops, but remember that the first letter of a sentence has a capital letter, as do proper nouns. You have used a capital letter for your name but not for your mum and dads names. You can correct these at any time.
Hi Elldiana, thank you for telling us a little about yourself, but keeping your information cybersmart as you have is very important. Good use of full stops, but remember that the first letter of a sentence has a capital letter, as do proper nouns. You have used a capital letter for your name but not for your mum and dads names. You can correct these at any time.
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